When the third jar this week
slips and shatters on the kitchen floor,
while you're wringing out the mop, love me.
Love me like it's just the two of us,
like the answers will be revealed,
oracle tea cups spelling out messages in soggy leaves.
Love me, bent on escape, running
to the garden, beating at the dirt.
Block the emergency exits and love me.
Love me like we planned this,
carefully, making dignified strokes of the pen.
Love me as if the burden sits on your chest
like a breeze, mixing with your breath,
momentarily raising a few strands of hair.
Press your optimism to me like a blanket.
Whisper to me like I'm a one-night stand,
a dying soldier, cut out lies for me
that hang around the doorframe,
fragile paper dolls. Grab me
by the shoulders and look at me,
as if you understand.
I'm really intrested in your ideas, just incredible sens of emotions, and the poem as beautiful as the picture itself, thank you for hope, especially needed in my situation... greetings, Maciek (PL)
The composition of this blows my mind! Simply amazing job. When I first saw this I thought it was a painting. Something about this brings back alot of smells and feelings. hmmmm great job
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the heart opens....
pours....
empties....
and is immediately filled again...
with love.
such a wonderful work, anna. the clarity, the angle of the boots the, ironwork in back. simple images evolve into so much more with the trained eye....and the prose is magnificent, reaching into the soul, touching....leaving it's mark.
This is a complete and wonderful Art work, Anna... The photo, first: the light, the mood, the composition, here everything is made with elegance and open-eye for harmony and everyday-ish beauty... The words then: I can feel deeply each word, each space between the words, each hidden image, each filled sensation, each empty desire...
This is a masterpiece of emotion.
Thank you so much for your many kind words! I deeply aprreciate each one! I do not yet know your situation, but let me tell you that bringing you hope through this, brings me such happiness alone just knowing
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pours....
empties....
and is immediately filled again...
with love.
such a wonderful work, anna. the clarity, the angle of the boots the, ironwork in back. simple images evolve into so much more with the trained eye....and the prose is magnificent, reaching into the soul, touching....leaving it's mark.
as always.
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look over my shoulder....then...
expose yourself to a true talent.
This is a masterpiece of emotion.
space here
your words radiate
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my kicking up the love dirt.
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anna
Be curious
Thank you so much for your many kind words! I deeply aprreciate each one! I do not yet know your situation, but let me tell you that bringing you hope through this, brings me such happiness alone just knowing
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anna
Be curious
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